It was an autumn summer
A day lazy and hot
While candy store vendors
Were setting up shop
And lemonade sippers
Relaxed in the shade
Our eyes met each other
A connection . . . more
"Wow. what a great article- that reminded me of what I love and miss about Cali. I was raised in San Bernardino. Love California- there is no other state that can top it! Thanks, Lady Neetah, now I want . . ." more
Lewis is now friends with Darin Waugh Oct 04, 2008 5:23PM EDT
I am the Warrior Poet. I am the Bard of Darkness. I am a writer, so that automatically means I'm half crazy, a drifter in and out of worlds and dreams, a sage, a shaman, a prophet. I am your guide to a realm of imaginings wild, a runaway train of ideas and stories. Come with me, and see for yourself.
On Gather, I'm Looking For ...:
readers and writers. Dreamers and doubters. Geniuses and madmen. One and all.
i wrote a poem in honor of a photo you posted...it's a pink, glowing rose. i called my poem, a valuable rose. it's spotlighted, check it out :P miss you :P
Lewis! I do know how life can get but believe me I'm sooo happy that you found time to revisit my story. I kinda took on a lot recently and haven't even had time to write but I really miss it, ya know.
love the motto you have, death is no reason to live. it's so true. :P lookin' forward to more of your poems. my mom is not usually a fan of poetry but she loves yours. i wrote another one and it's dark. the darkest one of mine yet. i hope you don't mind me posting my poetry that's not dark to your group.
Thanks for your input. I appreciate your taking the time to look at my work. I use the Lilitu form too, when the main character's father, an Old World Orthodox Jew, calls her that while he's scolding her. I'll definitely read more of your work when I'm finished editing...
Lewis , Thanks for stopping by . You are right , it is a touchy subject and most of all is very individual and obviously relative to the dynamic within the relationship. It really frosts me to see people judging (Elizabeth Edwards comes to mind now ) without having the slightest clue of what is going on in the Edwards household or even more , having no right in extending the pain that woman must be going through . Even if people make mistakes , who are we to stone them ? Sorry , i get really "hot" around this kind of matter just because i'm a client of the club myself and had close friends judge my situation and take positions vis a vis the whole thing ... Anyway , sorry for the ramble , thanks again for stopping by and commenting :)
